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Thursday, 27 August 2015

My speech

This term we have been working on writing persuasive techniques
           My speech topic is about Families are important.
I need to work on confidence and speaking clearly.





3 comments:

  1. Hi Heamapo,
    It's great to see that you can embed a video onto your blog and that you considered what improvements you need to make. What was positive about your speech?

    If you had to do another persuasive speech would you stick with this topic, or do another one?

    - Miss Percy

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  2. Is your speech nice

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  3. Hey Heamapo
    I really like how you had some expiration in your speech! Can you speak a little bit louder next time?
    From Your Best Friend Tulei

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